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So I'm practicing wings, obvisiously I didn't make a person, just an outline, I'll probably finish that later. I just wanted to know if the wings are ok, any advice,suggestions , or comments are welcome. Tell me how to improve! 
Image size
1698x2230px 3.2 MB
Make
HP
Model
HP Scanjet djf4200
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I think it looks good so far! 
will you shade them? oh and are they feathers like on a bird? ( 
sorry for so many questions)
the only suggestion I have is that, at the edge of the wing, the little feathers just lead up to a straight line. To make the wing look more curved you could make a thicker line and shade under it to make it look more 3-D....wait lets find a picture....ah here is a perfect one! [link] of course, you don't have to do it exactly like that
oh and (you don't really have to pay attention to this) what I do, is when I draw, I will do the rough sketch (which is always really messy, but thats ok!) and the I will erase ever so slightly so I can just bearly see it on the picture and then I go over it again in more detail and shading (or you could go over it in pen/marker and erase the lines too)
lol there I go on a rampage....sorry
I also like the way you made the paper look! do it like that when your finished too! It will look great
will you shade them? oh and are they feathers like on a bird? ( sorry for so many questions) the only suggestion I have is that, at the edge of the wing, the little feathers just lead up to a straight line. To make the wing look more curved you could make a thicker line and shade under it to make it look more 3-D....wait lets find a picture....ah here is a perfect one! [link] of course, you don't have to do it exactly like that
oh and (you don't really have to pay attention to this) what I do, is when I draw, I will do the rough sketch (which is always really messy, but thats ok!) and the I will erase ever so slightly so I can just bearly see it on the picture and then I go over it again in more detail and shading (or you could go over it in pen/marker and erase the lines too)
lol there I go on a rampage....sorry
I also like the way you made the paper look! do it like that when your finished too! It will look great